We have looked again at the same trailers that we looked at before but see what narrative techniques they used throughout the trailer and how we could relate this to my trailer.
Below in the table are narrative texts used by the existing trailers are in one column and in the second column is how we have adapted those texts to suit our trailer.
My adapted Trailers Texts | |
An ordinary group of friends | |
Whose lives…are in danger | |
But this evening | |
There lives will change | |
Parents were out | |
But someone else was in | |
Your FRIENDS…are DISAPPEARING | |
This…is only…the START | |
A dare no one would never forget | |
A tail that no one would live to tell | |
friends for life...and death |
1 comment:
Your script is ok Emily, but it is very similar to your found one. As such I would not post them side by side like this - I would just sum up the conventions you found about some voiceovers and then post your idea. I'd also make sure that you take my comment off your blog once you have read it! Also try to go to your settings and make sure that you have comment moderation switched on - then you can see my comment, but you wouldn't have to post it!
Mrs S
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